Comments on: Flying Bathtubs by Blake http://roosevelt.edublogs.org/2008/05/07/flying-bathtubs-by-blake/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Fri, 04 Dec 2009 03:05:42 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Mrs. Matuszeski http://roosevelt.edublogs.org/2008/05/07/flying-bathtubs-by-blake/comment-page-1/#comment-27 Mrs. Matuszeski Fri, 09 May 2008 05:41:30 +0000 http://roosevelt.edublogs.org/2008/05/07/flying-bathtubs-by-blake/#comment-27 Hi Blake, My name is Mrs. Matuzeski. I teach reading at Roosevelt. I enjoyed the story you wrote about the flying bathtub. You did a great job with organization and with using descriptive words. As I was reading, I could imagine myself in the car with your grandma and that bath tub coming out of nowhere. Words like swerved and dodged and splinters helped me as a reader visualize what happened in your story. Good writers choose words carefully and with the purpose of helping the reader feel like they are a part of what is happening in a story. You did just that, great writing work! Mrs. Matuszeski Hi Blake,

My name is Mrs. Matuzeski. I teach reading at Roosevelt. I enjoyed the story you wrote about the flying bathtub. You did a great job with organization and with using descriptive words. As I was reading, I could imagine myself in the car with your grandma and that bath tub coming out of nowhere. Words like swerved and dodged and splinters helped me as a reader visualize what happened in your story. Good writers choose words carefully and with the purpose of helping the reader feel like they are a part of what is happening in a story. You did just that, great writing work!

Mrs. Matuszeski

]]> By: Mr. Schuldt http://roosevelt.edublogs.org/2008/05/07/flying-bathtubs-by-blake/comment-page-1/#comment-26 Mr. Schuldt Thu, 08 May 2008 15:20:30 +0000 http://roosevelt.edublogs.org/2008/05/07/flying-bathtubs-by-blake/#comment-26 Hi Blake. My name is Mr. Schuldt; I am a principal for the Council Bluffs School District. I enjoyed reading your story about the flying tub. You added some great detail in your story. That, along with your nice organization, helped paint a picture of the event in my mind. That is a quality found in great writing. Keep on writing! Hi Blake. My name is Mr. Schuldt; I am a principal for the Council Bluffs School District. I enjoyed reading your story about the flying tub. You added some great detail in your story. That, along with your nice organization, helped paint a picture of the event in my mind. That is a quality found in great writing. Keep on writing!

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